Your full query letter as you'd send it to an agent (required)
A one-to-two sentence hook for your book (optional but recommended)
Opening pages of your manuscript (optional but recommended)
How an agent would actually react to this package - what catches the eye, what slides off, whether they'd keep reading.
Clarity, hook, stakes, tone - with specific, actionable feedback on what's working and what isn't.
Is your elevator pitch strong enough for a meeting? Who, goal, conflict, stakes - broken down.
Opening hook, character, pacing, voice - and whether your pages deliver on what your query promises.
Numerical ratings (1-10) across key craft dimensions plus AI-writing likelihood assessment.
The highest-impact things to fix before sending your next query, in order of priority.
Sample excerpt - Agent Reality Check
"An agent picking this up would notice the voice immediately - there's a sardonic edge to the narrator that signals literary sensibility without being precious about it. The query does what it needs to do: protagonist with a clear want, obstacle that feels personal and structural, stakes that extend beyond the immediate plot. The comp titles are doing real work (both recent, both in lane). Where the read wobbles is the opening pages - the first scene is all setup, no friction. An agent might keep reading based on the query strength, but the sample needs to deliver tension faster. This is close. One more revision pass on the opening chapter could tip it."
Sample excerpt - Craft Scorecard
| Criterion | Score | Tier |
|---|---|---|
| Voice & Prose | 7/10 | Strong |
| Emotional Engagement | 6/10 | Borderline |
| Pacing & Structure | 5/10 | Borderline |
| Concept & Hook | 8/10 | Strong |
| Market Alignment | 7/10 | Strong |
| AI-Writing Likelihood | 2/10 | Strongly Human |
Fiction writers preparing to query agents
Authors who want honest feedback before sending submissions
Writers who've been getting form rejections and want to understand why
Anyone who wants a professional-level read without the $500+ editorial fee
This is not a line edit. We don't rewrite your query or pages.
This is not a guarantee. No tool can promise you an agent or a deal.
This is not a replacement for human readers. Use it alongside critique partners, beta readers, and (when you're ready) professional editors.
This is assessment, not generation. We read what you've written and tell you how it lands.